Hunting by Helio J Cordeiro - Short - It is about a wild beast already to attack the hunters in the savannah. 2 pages - pdf, format

hey Helio, well, this was, um, well it was interesting, but I did not get it, I think it flew right over my head....LOL

does this take place in savannah Georgia or some place in Africa, cause they have strong African accents.

I  like your stuff, but this, well if there is hidden meaning here I didn't see it, that could just be my fault.

I wish I could say something else, but I'm at a loss.  

Anyways, like I said before I love your stuff, bu sometimes I just don't get it.

I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a statement about SS or what, Helio, but you've completely lost me here.


Phil

Helio

I believe this was set in the savannah over in africa not in savannah georgia. Anyway, this was just too short to really get a grasp on what was happening. I think we had two different characters who acted opposite and that cause one to be eaten for dinner on the savannah. Do I have it right or wrong?

Spencer

I think it might be a statement about moderators of forums or chat rooms.  Yeah, I'd like to bag a few of them myself (noone here mind you).  

Helio.  There isn't much of a story here.  I would almost go so far as to say there isn't a story here.  I'm not sure where you want to take this so I can't even make any suggestion that will help.  

Helio,

I knew exactly what was going on until the very end when you mentioned moderator. Knowing that you don't write random stuff, I'm going to assume that there is a deeper meaning here. I'm just going to have to ponder a little.

Btw, if you manage to make the readers think and look for a different meaning, it means that you did have some effect on the reader. Not that easy to do in one page.

Pia

Hmm.  Not so sure I like this one.

This one must surely be directed at that jackass Shelton...right?  Right....

Hey guys!

I love to hear from you all! Thanks a lot!

The moderators are the most, ever! They are in extiction, you know?! I love them!

cheeers
Helio

Quoted from Helio The moderators are the most, ever! They are in extiction, you know?! I love them!

Somehow, Helio, that doesn't tie up any loose ends for me

Sorry Michael, but I tried so hard to make them happy with this one!

Er Helio I'm completely lost with this one.

It seems to be to simple and complicated for me, Does that make sense?

I mean it reads easy but the significance eludes me.

Anywho I'll blatently plug my own short here, for anyone who wants to be confused because it seems people don't get that either.  (is this frowned upon by the way?)

God I can waffle.

Hey helio, you always come with a surprise. Keeping people guessing and thinking is your uniqie quality throughout your scripts. And I enjoy that, but my God man lol. That's all I can really say. I was confused.

Gabe

My trouble was that I didn't get what the monster was moving "to..." Was it running towards the voices? Also,if all the voices are OS, that would make the monster on screen the whole time. Oh, and the ending went over my head. Should the word "of" be in there?

This wasn't good, but not necessarily bad. It was one page. Sometimes i get the feeling you just post random, pointless things for the hell of it... Formattings tops though!

Hi Al, Hit, Read and Alex. Thank you guys for the coments. Don't worry, fellas I will be more anderstandble next time (I'll try!)...Sometime my mind tricks with me, but I have to say sorry about my bad English. My translator has been very buzy now days and I'm thinking to give him a better salary or who know send to him a tanned Brazilian girl from Ipenema...

By the way about my bad English I have to say sorry mainly to Don Boose because he never complained about it...Sorry, Don, for you have to read my scripts every time I post them!