The Sasquatch Massacre by Wade - Horror - Chip is a single father, and during a long weekend at his son's (Wilson) school he decides to take him Camping in the woods. However, after the first night, they hear a loud bang on their trailer, and when they open it they find a young couple named Frank and Hannah covered in the blood. The couple explain that they are the only survivours from a group of 3 couples who were brutally murdered by Sasquatch. They soon find themselves trapped in their motorhome fending for there lives. Meanwhile, a self-proclaimed Hunter, a self-proclaimed outdoorsmen, and two cops must battle the Sasquatch outside the motorhome. 90 pages - doc, format

Hellooooooooooooo

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* You might want to shorten your log line a little.  As is basically gives away the entire plot to the movie as it stands.  Usually one or two sentences would be best.
* Some rough formatting.  Not sure if it was in the transfer or you simply didn't hit "Enter" after the end of a sentence.  
* Never assign an actor to play a part - for example you used Corey Feldman to be a camper.  Just let people use their imaginations.
* Your Dialogue was bad.  It seemed almost more comedy than horror but maybe you were going for a horror / comedy kinda thing I dunno.
* Nice use of a severed head there  

Overall it really needs some touch ups and a rewrite.  However if it makes you feel better I see Sasquatch movies all the time on the Sci Fi Channel so who knows?  You might have something on your hands

Brion.  

Hey what's the idea with having a rampaging, murderous Sasquatch. That's just not possible. that's not even cool.

Haven't you seen Harry and Hendersons? Sasquatch are cute, cuddly, fluffy as a hamster and about as intelligent as one too. And no one makes horror movies about Hamsters.

    

Quoted from darthbrion Hellooooooooooooo * Spoilers * * You might want to shorten your log line a little.  As is basically gives away the entire plot to the movie as it stands.  Usually one or two sentences would be best. * Some rough formatting.  Not sure if it was in the transfer or you simply didn't hit "Enter" after the end of a sentence.   * Never assign an actor to play a part - for example you used Corey Feldman to be a camper.  Just let people use their imaginations. * Your Dialogue was bad.  It seemed almost more comedy than horror but maybe you were going for a horror / comedy kinda thing I dunno. * Nice use of a severed head there   Overall it really needs some touch ups and a rewrite.  However if it makes you feel better I see Sasquatch movies all the time on the Sci Fi Channel so who knows?  You might have something on your hands Brion.

yeah, do that. Other that, the script was great. I'm writing some scripts in the next year and when I write them, I'd like some help from you guys.

From how your description of the movie sounds,  I'm going to lay off the script...for now.  However, sasquatch movies are...well...unheard of to be good.  What I am trying to say here is why not make this 90 page movie into a Sci-Fi television short.  Just...make it more interesting.  Right now I wouldn't want to read it, but with a little tuch up who knows?  

Colby

along with what ijewcolby said, maybe even one of the masters of horror short films. Those are great and I'd bet it'd be more appriciated if it was on a show than a full length movie.
One reason I say this is... THE COVENENT was very disappointing, I think it would have been better if it would have been a sci-fi origional instead of a theater movie. I thought it was a disappointing film.