Dry Gulch by Tomas W. Beaumont (hound) - Thriller - Two female disc jockeys travel to an outdoor rock festival anticipating a weekend of fun and great music. These two are used to getting up close and personal with rock musicians, but nothing could prepare them for what awaits them at The Dry Gulch Festival. It seems one of the acts is a band of gothic maniacs bent on murder and mayhem. After their show, this motley crew of musicians plan on inviting the two women back to their tour bus for an after party. The girls quickly find out that this was one invitation they both should have declined. Will they survive the night?  129 - doc, format

   If you're going to use Microsoft Word, then why not use Paragragh Styles?  It would have made formatting all the dialogue much easier.  Go to Format/ Styles & Formatting/, then click New Style and customize to create a paragragh style for each of the formatting elements (slugline, description, character, dialogue, etc.)  
  It would have saved you a LOT of needless TAB(bing) to indent each dialogue paragragh. Even so, you probably should have saved and uploaded an Rich Text (.rtf) version of the script instead because a lot of people may not have Word and therefore can't read it anyway.   That said, the script formatting looks quite good, save for a few page breaks that could have been added.
  The writing style could be improved.  You should not mention the camera or have any "We see(s)."  
  

I liked the basic outline of this script. I've been to many outdoor festivals and could see events like this going down unbeknown to the masses.

I thought the gothic band was gonna be actual demons, but from what I got from it, they were just humans.

Good stuff all in all...