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Posted: February 10th, 2008, 3:15pm Report to Moderator
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Rufus Buck Gang by Norman Jones - Western - While statehood for Oklahoma territory was being debated in the halls of congress, Oklahoma territory settlers were being terrorized by a band of four Black Creek Indians and one full Black. The gang led by RUFUS BUCK, killed, raped and robbed more people than Billy the Kid and the James Gang combined.  128 pages - doc, format


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I had a look at this and you've obviously gone for a challenging topic. I didn't get very far because it is difficult to stick with.

The multiple introductions in flashback near the start make for a hard to get into story. It doesn't hit the ground running and we don't get a clean idea early on what the central core of the story is going to be. Who is the protagonist? 15 pages in I couldn't tell you.

I know it is almost a cliche on this website but if you have the option to get screenwriting software it really does make the process way easier.

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