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Don
Posted: August 20th, 2008, 4:59pm Report to Moderator
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Giant Christmas Turkeys by Spencer McDonald - Short, Action - Careful what you wish for little Rusty Chester, you might just get swallowed. 5 pages - pdf, format


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Posted: August 20th, 2008, 7:04pm Report to Moderator
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I enjoyed this story a lot, Spencer.  It's probably the feel-good script of the week.

My only suggestion for you would be to rewrite it and lengthen it.  The characters work well with each other and the whole Christmas-turkey-thing was fresh and enjoyable.


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Phil -- Thank you for the read and feedback. As always, it's appreciated.


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Hey Spencer, I liked this script.  I thought the dialogue was really good and Rusty's imagination was quite funny.  Giant Christmas Turkeys is a funny thought, mind they do get quite big like.  Anyway I really enjoyed this read, it was a nice family story.  I can't think of anything that I would suggest changing.


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Enjoyed the script Spencer. Pretty funny and imaginative.

Haven't really got any suggestions to improve it but thought I'd let you know that I liked it.


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