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Scar Tissue Films
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 7:18pm
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dogglebe
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 7:29pm
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Rick, you need to fix the volume on this. If I didn't read the script, I'd have no idea what was going on.
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Tommyp
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 7:31pm
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I feel sick... Well done Pia... I suppose! I was gonna grab some food just now, but noooo, Pia had to ruin it for me by her disgusting little movie! I'm not hungry anymore.
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jayrex
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 7:32pm
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That's an excellent short.
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Scar Tissue Films
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 7:32pm
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dogglebe
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 7:35pm
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I heard the commercial, before it, just fine. Then the volume drops.
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Scar Tissue Films
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 7:38pm
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That's because they deliberately play commercials too loud. You'll notice it on TV as well.
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Shelton
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 7:56pm
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Sound seemed okay to me.
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Murphy
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 8:00pm
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Pia, that was disgusting! You should be ashamed of yourself.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 8:07pm
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Oh I guess I missed this thread!!
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James McClung
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 8:23pm
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Big congrats, Pia! This was fabulous, not to mention grosser than I expected. The sound effects and real maggots really made this one. The acting and credit sequence were on the money as well. I'm really glad someone with actual production value decided to do this. I'd actually considered filming this instead of CC but due to the lack of a suitable "hospital" set, let alone a friend who'd want to be seen as "that girl," I opted to go with the latter.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 9:20pm
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Who wouldn't want to play "that girl"??
I would have done it in a heartbeat if the character was supposed to be old.... actually that might have added too the grossness.
Anyway, I think this looked really sharp!!
Can't wait to see Dog Run. That should be really good!
Great job Rick!!
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mcornetto
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 9:58pm
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Nicely done you two. I thought it worked especially well in a British setting, somehow the Brits can really pull something like this off.
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Shelton
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 10:24pm
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Can't wait to see Dog Run. That should be really good!
I think Rick is still working on getting the sound up to Phil's specifications.
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CindyLKeller
Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 11:57pm
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Sound is fine here, too.
Great job!
It's always such a treat to see simplyscripters scripts on film.
Cindy
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