I read your script and liked it! I wasn't sure that I would from the logline since I have an aversion to stories about script writers. I thought you pulled it off. The only thing I didn't understand was why Marty was so nervous and later in awe of Richard's calm at having had his script writing project cancelled. Marty had been presented as a ball buster and to change his character so much rang a little hollow to me.
Gary |