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Shelton
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:50am
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I have to admit, I haven't been too pleased with the feedback so far. I really think people should take a step back, outline what they want to say, and then write it in a very educated manner. Burning these things out is clearly no way to go. I propose that every script should be read and then contemplated for no less than 16 days before feedback is posted. Thank you.
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Murphy
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:53am
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Shelton, that was just shit. Really, really awful. The worst post I have read today, just boring.
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Shelton
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:55am
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Quoted from Murphy
Shelton, that was just shit. Really, really awful. The worst post I have read today, just boring.
I hate your stupid face and lilty voice.
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Murphy
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:56am
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Yeah? And how long do you last in Bed then? Hey? hey?
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steven8
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:56am
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I don't see the point in this thread. Terrible. Terribly boring. Shelton, your grammar sucks, and you live in a black and white world. See you in 16 days.
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The boy who could fly
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:57am
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This thread is just awful, really awful...terribly boring, this thread is missing so many things.....like a point, just a waste of time.
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Shelton
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:57am
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Quoted from Murphy
Yeah? And how long do you last in Bed then? Hey? hey?
Enough to make two kids, virgin wool.
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steven8
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:59am
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Shelton, you're a s*** poster!
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Shelton
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:04am
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This thread is just awful, really awful...terribly boring, this thread is missing so many things.....like a point, just a waste of time.
The point is behind the point that you've missed. Have you ever walked down the street and seen a little person, and thought to yourself "Hey, there's a little person" and then kept right on walking, only to find a used hairbrush in the street and say "Hey, there's a used hairbrush"?
It's kind of like that, only when it's all said and done, you try to make a giant weapon that harnesses the sun to blow things up, much like Archimedes.
It may not make the most sense in the world, but it deserves more than some shitty, tossed off response.
Absorb...post.
And that's... one to grow on.
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The boy who could fly
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:08am
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Have you ever walked down the street and seen a little person, and thought to yourself "Hey, there's a little person"
I LOVE MIDGETS...they are my favorite.....i plan on getting one...they're so cute, i'd give him a stool to spin around on and a big beach ball to see if he can grip onto it with his tiny sausage fingers....so ya...I LOVE MIDGETS!
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Shelton
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:09am
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Shelton, you're a s*** poster!
You wanna take another crack at that one, cowboy? This thread exists for no other reason than to respond to inane nonsense like you just posted.
Absorb... post.
It can change your life.
Still want me to read your script?
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steven8
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:11am
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This is your one post so far in the OWC. How much absorbency is involved here?
Okey-dokey. Kidding over. Just joking, your cowboy-ness. Feel free to expunge my junk.
No one has to read my script who doesn't want to.
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Shelton
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:13am
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This is your one post so far in the OWC. How much absorbency is involved here?
A lot, which you would have realized if you could detect sarcasm. Would you prefer I bash every script without really commenting on the script itself like your butt buddy?
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The boy who could fly
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:15am
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steven8
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:28am
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A lot, which you would have realized if you could detect sarcasm. Would you prefer I bash every script without really commenting on the script itself like your butt buddy?
Not my buddy, that's for sure! My posts in the OWC have been positive points about the scripts I've read. The last thing we need to do is just rip people up without thinking.
I didn't mean to hijack your thread in any way. I guess I was just letting off some steam about what I've been reading in the OWC.
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