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Don
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 2:33pm Report to Moderator
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Love Is All You Need by Bugs Bunny - Short, Drama - A secret is revealed during a family picnic. - pdf, format


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Short (too short?), crude and not good. This is definetely not a drama. "Memories" is a master piece compared to this one.  I can't see the writer's intent.


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I loved this one. No pun intended. Wait, yes it is. I can't stop laughing. I can imagine this being in a Robot Chicken episode...Or a Tim and Eric Awesome Show Great Job skit.

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I like this one, too. It's like one big middle finger. LOL. Anyway, its well written, well formatted and meets all the criteria.
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Yikes. Poor grammar, no drama, there was a secret and a picnic though.

As for "scripts that didn't even try," I thought this one was funnier than "Memories" and it's the first script I've ever read written by a cartoon character.
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Pathetic!  Embarrassing!  Really a total terd.  Another crap entry that didn't take anything seriously.  Not remotely funny.  This kind of shit shouldn't even be allowed to be posted.

What a waste!
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Quoted from Dreamscale
Pathetic!  Embarrassing!  Really a total terd.  Another crap entry that didn't take anything seriously.  Not remotely funny.  This kind of shit shouldn't even be allowed to be posted.

What a waste!


I don't think it's any stretch of the imagination to think that the author did not feel they had just produced the next Citizen Kane when it was completed.  Dreamy, I'm beginning to wonder if folks don't just do this stuff to see if they can get your blood vessels to burst.  Seems to be working. . .



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Well.... I am a little flummoxed as to why someone would enter this!

Comedy is so subjective! If I thought it was funny, I would probably be enthused about this, but I didn't and I'm not!

I look forward to the author's comments!

Andrew


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Shelton
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Quoted from Andrew

I look forward to the author's comments!


I think this was written by the AMPTP's script machine.


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I'm guessing the author is British, from his use of the phrase the "lot of them."  Just a guess, though.  I have to admit, it was so damn primitive it made me laugh.  This really reads like something written by a high school freshman.  No drama, no dialogue, no characterization.  But the thought of this little bastard calling his family a bunch of creepy cunts...it made me laugh.


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But the thought of this little bastard calling his family a bunch of creepy cunts...it made me laugh.


Haha!! That just really made me chuckle. I have no idea why, but the use of "little bastard" can be so funny when used correctly!


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I think this was written by the AMPTP's script machine.


And possibly one or two more!

Andrew




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Looks like someone jizzed all over the OWC.
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This is a breathless, exciting story, heartbreaking and exhilarating at the same time........wait...that's Eberts review for slumdog, oh well, I think it fits for this one as well, me likey


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Shelton
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This script makes me want to never write anything again.  There are probably some who are pleased by that.


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Hmmm interesting script. Don't really like it. At all. Too short... and to yuck...


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