Twilight Street by Will Roberts (willfromwales) - Short - Like an episode of Eastenders.But with a mad scientist,a giant lizard, an exorcism, a werewolf, and a Spaceship. 24 pages - pdf, format

Hi Will

I've just read this, and thought it was a very entertaining short; easy to read, good dialogue between characters and amusing too.

I don't know if you knew, but your title page has not been filled in? If you use Celtx, there's a tab at the bottom to fill in your details.

Also there's a spelling error;  'The lizard triesmto pull Tony away but it’s tiny arms
can not reach where Tony is.'

Other than that though, Mate, a great effort- A Sci-Fi/Horror/Comedy Eastenders-God knows Eastenders needs a bit of humour! keep it up.

Craig