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stevie
Posted: June 30th, 2009, 6:11pm Report to Moderator
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Hi guys. Just wanted some advice on a techie question. Ok, I'm doing a short and a character has scenes of memories from his life. Literally, certain events of his life will 'flash' up. Each is in a different year, a couple of years apart, with 4 time periods in all. There will be brief action lines and dialogue in each one. the whole bit would be only a minute of screen time, maybe less.

I had thought to write it as montage with supers saying the locale and year. But I don't think dialogue is in montages? After the scenes it will go back to the present time in the story. any ideas? Cheers



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I'm sure you can have dialogue in montages Stevie. It's covered in

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1100748149/

You could have one of your scenes then...

INT. 17 STEVIE STREET - KITCHEN - JULY 1985 - DAY

Karen kisses Joe then takes the keys from him

                    KAREN
         My keys, not yours.

INT. 24 RINGO STREET - LIVING ROOM - DECEMBER 1996 - DAY

Karen is now heavily pregnant. Joe takes the keys from her hand.

                    JOE
         Now these keys are mine darling.

INT. 69 LENNON AVENUE - JULY 2005 - DAY

Karen now has short hair and earrings the size of tennis balls.

                    KAREN
        What do you mean you've lost the keys?


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stevie
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Thanks RV! Love the street names...

Ok, I checked that old thread. I'll have to go with flashbacks I think, as my scenes aren't really montage. I'll use supers for the place and year and see how it goes. It's nearly done and I hope to send it to Don in a couple of days. Cheers buddy.



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You can have dialouge in montages. I'll admit it doesn't look nice but you can have them. If you read pilot of scrubs theres one in there.
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