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Posted: December 8th, 2010, 8:35pm Report to Moderator

So, what are you writing?

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This just in.

"Hey! ... A company in North Carolina, Down Home Films, ... filmed Broken, which was posted on your site a while back.
Here's a link to the film!

Broken is based on the script Narrative

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Posted: December 8th, 2010, 9:22pm Report to Moderator

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I thought this was very well done.  Great shots, and a good atmosphere all around.

I don't recall reading the script, but I may have to dig it up and check it out, just to see what the initial reaction to all the VO was.  For some reason those don't go over too well on paper but work out alright on film.

The story was pretty basic, but I enjoyed how the end tied in with the flashback portion.

Congrats, nice work, and thanks for your service.

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Posted: December 8th, 2010, 9:25pm Report to Moderator
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I liked this!  In five minutes or less, you were able to turn the simplest concept of revenge into something thoughtful and compelling.  This is not an easy thing.      

Very nice job!
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Posted: December 8th, 2010, 9:29pm Report to Moderator
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Wow, nice film. Beautifully directed. Very well made. Congrats to you Travis. Very impressed with this work. Did it win any film comps yet?


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