Turbo Falcon Laser by Keenan Martens (kmart), Joel Laflamme, Nathan Hart - Comedy - 3 Guys try and break into the filmmaking industry by making their own movies.  Think Flight of the Concords only with movies.  Each episode contains a faux trailer for whatever movie that episode is based around. - html, format

Turbo Falcon Laser.  Let me just say, that's an awesome title.  But, I opened up the script and the title is "Hacks."

I just scrolled the first few pages, but it was riddled with strange typos.  Made reading this too hard.  Take a look, you'll see.  

Quoted from Ryan1 Turbo Falcon Laser.  Let me just say, that's an awesome title.  But, I opened up the script and the title is "Hacks." I just scrolled the first few pages, but it was riddled with strange typos.  Made reading this too hard.  Take a look, you'll see.

Is that kinda like getting rickrolled by a script?

E.D.

This had some funny parts to it.  The mac-10 is shakespear shit line.  The trailers (a bit long) but funny.  The squib joke and the braveheart vs. Apollo running gag.  The arms dealing gas station clerk also funny.

You have a comedic voice for writing.

Are you using final draft or what? Format was off.  Waaaay off.  With a lot of errors but I had patience to ignore it, most people wont and thats too bad because its a solid effort.

Also was this a 20-22 pg long script because it felt like it was reading long and would be way better if it was shorter.

I liked it though.

Not only is it riddled with strange typos, it's written absolutely horrendously.

I don't know how or why anyone would read the entire script.

Back to the drawing board...