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Don
Posted: July 3rd, 2011, 11:52pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Will You Be Mine by Louise Lee Mei - Short - Coming to the aid of a stranger, Everline fights against her gift to save him. 8 pages - pdf, format


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I have no clue what is happening here.  Maybe that's my fault, but wtf is going on here?
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Apologies. Not a very clear draft. Will resubmit a better one soon!
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Just wondering if you've worked on a rewrite yet?  I liked the logline but the script was hard to read.  I'd be interested in reading a newer version.
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Yeah, it's well written in terms of descriptions and action, but the overall point of it is not that clear, which I don't mind. But If you're resubmitting it I'll hold of talking too much about it and will look for the newer version when you put it up.
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