Strong and Wise by Richard Ashcraft (therichcraft) - Sci Fi, Parody - The superhuman Strong and the psychic Wise battle the tacky Lovecraft entity in a cheap motel. The Mystics must save seven sex perverts from the clutches of a transvestite fanboy's creation. Lovecraft already has the other Mystics wanting to have an orgy. 68 pages - doc, format

Hey Richard,

I doubt you will ever look at this but anyway:

68 pages is way too short for a feature.

The logline sounds like a weird psycho porn film which makes no sense to me. Parody or not.

Upload this in a pdf format.

Read some scripts and work on your formatting, take out all the camera directions for starters unless you are directing this yourself. If you are I would like to be involved somehow, it would be interesting to film.

Good luck and keep writing.

Steve.

If I ever win the lottery, I will film this for a web series. I intended this script to be a cross between Sapphire and Steel and Benny Hill. It's also a revised version of my Samson and Minerva script that I posted on here some time ago.

I'm usually a Super Friends kind of comic-book fanboy. But I felt that I need to branch out if I'm to compete in today's world.

I used to live in Perth in 1974. I'm 46 now and devote my time to writing. What scripts have you written? On VBCTV.com I wrote The World Power and Hawkins and Dover. I'll be posting season two of Hawkins and Dover there soon. I'll also be posting my Marvels script here featuring the 1940s Captain America, Sub-Mariner, and Human Torch.

Thanks for reading my script. Later.