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Posted: March 18th, 2012, 5:26pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Micko and Deco Pilot Draft 1 by Wayne Heavey - Short - Pilot series about a young man moving to Dublin 10 pages - pdf, format


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Wayne I figured I would check it out for the Irish reference.

Logline "Pilot series about a young man moving to Dublin" It`s not really a logline nor is it interesting, also it is 10 pages... is it the start of a series?

Title page :Micko and Deco Pilot Draft 1
By: Wayne Heavey
Wayne Heavey ..... You mention your name twice.

Mick Ward as just moved up to Dublin from the Irish
countryside. He moves in with a true Dub Declan "Deco" Smith
who likes his odd giant..... This is more like your logline and should not be on the title page... Mick Ward HAS not as.

page 1  INT. MICK MEETS DECO ... this is not a slug ... INT. MICK`S KITCHEN - DAY is a slug

sorry dude... i`m really trying to read this but there are so many grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes... wrong slugs, bad descriptions of scenes and no descriptions of characters and thats only page 1.

You really should read a lot of scripts on this site, you will learn so much more.

Mark


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Hi

I did not edit it i just put it up.. Silly mistake.

My grammar is bad which is a shame
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