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Don
Posted: April 1st, 2012, 6:33pm Report to Moderator
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Ordinary Cole "Pilot" by Wheeler - Series, Comedy -  After being laid off from decades of loyal service, superhero Vic Cole must put his crime fighting life behind him learn to live the life of his secret identity instead. 10 pages - pdf, format


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Gabe,

I can definitely see this as a webisode.  The script itself is littered with quite a few typos and whatnot, but if you're gonna film it yourself then I guess it doesn't really matter.  All in all, I got a few chuckles out of it.   Hopefully you'll let us know when and where we can see it.
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I'm a sucker for superhero stories -- even unconventional ones.  I read this, and my first thought was, I really like the premise.  But as it was already mentioned, there are quite a few grammatical errors throughout it.  It wasn't too distracting, I suppose, but it's very noticeable.

All-in-all, I enjoyed the script...    
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