Melodramatic - introduction, to say the least - had the feeling that (visually) this wasn't too bad, but the writing -- well it was unusual - abundant use of tropes:
- the name Twist of Fate is designed into the side.
- as the small plane rushes across the sky, as it chases sunlight.
- The sizzle of the cockpit echoes inside the space.
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