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Don
Posted: September 12th, 2012, 6:31am Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Irony of Love by Muoneke Chidiebere - Comedy, Play - A Comedy play about a butler and a chief daughter - pdf, format


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Muoneke,

I'm sorry but I just didn't find this funny so I couldn't keep going with it. I just couldn't get into it. I think that in a comedy you have to throw the jokes at us one after the other, otherwise I think what you have here is a Dramedy.

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Hmmm have to agree it shouldn't really be in the comedy genre. You may want to read a few screenplays and get the formatting right. A lot of folks will stop reading at page one if it doesn't look like a screenplay. Keep working. Keep writing. And best of luck.
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I have to agree with feedbacks, it's not a comedy and it's also not proper format.

You might wanna try Trelby or Celtex to help you, they're free and look around at other scripts on the site.

Mark


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I haven't looked at it... but Dena, Mark, are you aware this is a stage 'play', not a screenplay? Just sayin'.


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