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Posted: October 19th, 2012, 6:26pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Snowman by Alan Heekin - Short -  A psychopath hunts Amusement Park security officers during a winter snowstorm. 39 pages - docx, format


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Sometimes themes develop, and I don't see a reason behind them; but just like something else I read - concept doesn't seem too bad - execution's all over the place.
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39 pages is a weird length. Technically, by Academy standards, it's still a short. I haven't read it yet, but is there a possibility of trimming it or expanding it to at least an hour?

I like the idea and I'll try and give this a read once my job quiets down.
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Since there's no new scripts posted, I started looking back for anything that sounded interesting.

Oh boy...um...let's start by asking 2 questions - 1)  Why isn't this in a PDF file?  2)  Why would anyone post a script completed on 1/11/11, and not make any corrections to the glaring errors in every single line of prose?

Yeah, as ABSTEEL noted, 39 pages is a very poor length.

Too bad the writer doesn't show up, as he can learn so much for so little.  Oh well, what can you do?  Let's let this sink, as the writing on display is abysmal.
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