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Posted: March 11th, 2013, 4:33pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Possession of Father Frank by  Edward Holland (ed) - Short, Horror, Suspense - Can a priest get back his soul/faith? - celtx, format


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Ed, not everyone has Celtix, and cannot open your file.


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No character descriptions
Camera directions
Stiff dialogue
Formatting is wrong

I'm assuming your inspiration was Stigmata.

The line "how's your faith these days, Father?" stands out.  
It's your best line of dialogue and it's ripped from that movie.

Maybe you should watch it a few more times.  It's not the best, but it's OK.
Learn what worked in that movie and what didn't.

Also, give The Exorcist a watch.  Classic film.
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