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Posted: June 21st, 2013, 6:12pm Report to Moderator
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Life in 1875 Century by Farzin Youabian - Drama - A certain class of dishonesty magnificents in its propotion, and climbing into high places. 97 pages - pdf, format


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Sorry, but this reads as if you plugged your screenplay into an online translator and just went with whatever you got.  (Read some of it before you guys just bust on me for being mean, btw)

I am actually not trying to be mean, but instead, encourage you to collaborate with a native speaker if you wish to present your scripts to an English-speaking market.

What you've got now is virtually unreadable, and will not make it through the front door anywhere.  Again, not trying to be mean, but somebody needs to tell you.


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Bert is right.  Not much makes sense to me.  I'd suggest reading more scripts and maybe try to word your screenplay in a way that is easier to understand.

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