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Posted: July 4th, 2014, 11:29am Report to Moderator
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Vamp-War by Jason Mickey - Short, Action, Horror - In the aftermath of a vampieric apocolypse, Three men make their final stand against the Vampire Horde. 6 pages. - pdf, format


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Meh, this was okay. It seemed like a scene of something longer. Plus, the death scene with Adam and Hunk was extremely cliche. Protagonists partners dying in movies, only to have the remaining partner scream "No!!!" before assuring the obviously dying person "They're okay" has already been done to death. Overall, decent action, but some of the writing choices (cliches and giving the two soldiers of the main villian's no name 'Soldier #1 and #2" felt a bit lazy. Good luck to you, and keep at it.


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Meh, this was okay. It seemed like a scene of something longer. Plus, the death scene with Adam and Hunk was extremely cliche. Protagonists partners dying in movies, only to have the remaining partner scream "No!!!" before assuring the obviously dying person "They're okay" has already been done to death. Overall, decent action, but some of the writing choices (cliches and giving the two soldiers of the main villian's no name 'Soldier #1 and #2" felt a bit lazy. Good luck to you, and keep at it.


Lol, yes. This script was meant to be very cliche nothing more than writing for fun. I did get an awesome concept idea though. Thanks for checking it out  
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