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Bubblegum Horror by Michael Frasca - Short, Crime, Comedy - A typical home invasion. Atypical teen girls with guns. It's all just for fun! 18 pages - pdf, format
Dunno why I read that as the logline was terrible. But like driving past a car crash I couldn't help but read it all. I had no idea what was going on or why and it didn't even end. Don't know if it was a pisser or not but I WANT MY MONEY BACK!
Oh yeah, I didn't pay anything to read that - still feel cheated though lol.
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"A house tucked quietly between identical houses in the middle of suburbia. It’s the typical white painted two-story with green curtains and wooden porch bannister. Two rows of large bushes alongside the bannister; obscuring them slightly. An orange stone path leading to the white solid oak door. The two girls walk along the path; setting down the carrier bag by the door."
it is to long.... no more than four lines. break it up.
when grant says "I’m going to scream. I’m going to scream. I’m going to" im sorry but if i was shot in the chest i wouldn't be saying that. to me the dialogue was forced on that one
the first couple of scenes reminds me of the start of "PULP FICTION" i don't know why but it feels the same...
also when the girls enter into the room you left out the slugline.... and when they dragged grant's feet behind the bushes... are their bushes inside the room. i'm confused....
no "the end"
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