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Don
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 5:58pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Crazy Thing About Love by Bryan Ugochukwu - Comedy - A recent heartbroken journalist goes to mexico and unknowingly falls in love with the leader of a mexican cartel -- Amor. 106 pages - pdf, format


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thanks you


check out my scripts here....let me know what you think

https://www.dropbox.com/s/amkdn3svt5rernq/last%20hope.pdf?dl=0

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Hey Ugo, I liked the premise, but there are quite a few errors just by the first page that made some things uncomprehensible. I'd say a proofreader would be helpful, these are some pretty quick and easy fixes that'll help you get off the ground.

Also, the capitalization on some words in the description and action blocks are unnecessary, cutting those out would be helpful.
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Ledbetter
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I'm with Josh here.

Chime in and let us know you really want some feedback and I'll be happy to offer some.

But I can tell you, It's gonna take some work. You have plenty of issue to work through.

But that doesn't mean it isnt a good story.

Shawn.....><
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