Bark by Ben - Comedy, Dark Comedy - Reaching his breaking point with an elderly neighbor's unruly dog, a popular children's book author hires an amateur hitman to steal the rambunctious pet, precipitating mishaps, murder and a clumsy cover-up attempt. 104 pages - pdf, format

Your logline puts me in mind of a Tom Sharpe novel. You've got a couple of typo's in your first couple of pages.

Ferrates when it should be ferrets. Interestingly, ferrates is actually a word.

Code Howard leans stooped shoulder against the office wall...

Reads awkwardly. Maybe... ah feck it, like this: Howard leans, shoulder stooped, against the wall.

Omit 'office' as it is already in the slug.

Code Mid 30s, with everyday, middle-guy looks.

Not good enough. I like the later description where you describe him as being shabby. I find that far more interesting than middle-guy... whatever that actually means.

If you're around and make a post I will read your entire screenplay.

Quoted from bjamin I went ahead and posted an updated version of the first 12 of 98 pages.  They can be found at:  http://issuu.com/bentucker/docs/bark

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I'll take a look once you fix the link.