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Don
Posted: April 19th, 2015, 10:31am Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Ass Doctor by James Aaron and Rhonda Knotty - Series, Comedy, South Park Spec - Kim Kardashian comes to South Park to see their world renowned "Ass Doctor" 26 pages - pdf, format


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Oh dear. I enjoyed this. I need therapy ... stat!!

I'm a 60 year old man who enjoys South Park (maybe I'll post a picture of myself in my south park pajamas). You hit all the right SP memes square in the nuts. Good job.


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Hi,

You have an error in the very beginning. A TV is not a voive over. Also, we wouldn't know there is a tv in the room because you failed to supply an action line showing the tv in the room. Who's voice is it from the tv.? Male or female? Old or young?

I enjoyed the pun at Hillary Clinton,  but unsure what any of this means.

Ok, im stopping at the extremely tasteless humor on pg 6.

Gl with the script

Tony
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I'm out at page 2. I actually got around the poor formatting. It's the repetitive jokes re Randy not being let into his wife's ass that pulled me out. Once was enough. I got more of a sitcom vibe from this than South Park.
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