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Don
Posted: December 2nd, 2015, 6:01pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Sinister Games by Ethan Chase - Action, Adventure - An embittered teen must cooperate with his future stepfather to stop a villainous avatar from taking over our world. 105 pages - pdf, format


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Ethan,

After reading your logline I first thought there was a possibility a copy error from you to the SS site, but it continues in your PDF. I'm guessing English is not your native tongue?

"As Ethan sprint through an intersection in a hurry... "

You must clean this up asap if you want reads/feedback.

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