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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    One Week Challenge    April 2016 OWC  ›  Not Today, Gucci - OWC Moderators: Mr. Blonde
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Don
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 10:07am Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Not Today, Gucci by 0 - Short, Comedy - Super heroes, Aussies, Walmarts and eyeless crocodiles -- this is the story of the Doctor. 6 pages - pdf, format


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Yikes, I guess the author has probably quite some problems. And me too, as I couldn't stop laughing. Extremely weird but funny!


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Dreamscale
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Wow...obviously a complete pisser...and quite a whacky one, too.

Too whacky for this old whack, and I'm out on Page 2, as this is completely senseless.
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If a schizophrenic screenwriter took acid and was given 30 minutes to write a stream-of-consciousness story with absolutely no f*cks given, I expect this would be the result.
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I'm sorry, but, I'm out on page 3.  I said I'd never bail, but, I can't follow it.  I know I'm legally high and all, but, I don't think anyone can follow this trip.

Sorry, I truly am.

Dan


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Equinox
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Well, it doesn't make sense, but the scenes alone are so weird, it made me laugh, and that's what comedy is about after all, isn't it? Never thought I'd ever like a script which doesn't make sense.


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The first two scares are very good but then you jumped and introduced crocodiles... yeah... I have no idea why.

In the end I don't know what I just read and why you would write that. Not funny
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Madcap at best.
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Started out promising but lost the plot even by my crazy standards lol

1 laugh out of 10 for the Aussie reference lol



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What the hell? I got through page three and couldn't take any more. Just not my thing.
So, yeah, it'll probably be some kind of cult classic. I wouldn't be surprised at all.


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irish eyes
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There`s too much blood in my alcohol

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Ahhh what?????

I could read this over and over and still have no clue what's going on? Are there 3 different stories?

My head hurts trying to make sense of it.


All I can say is good job on entering.


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I said that I'm not going to hate on any one of these entries, so, nice work for having a go.
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Reads like a pisser, but for once I’m sure pissers are allowed and encouraged.

Far too crazy and incoherent for my tastes but I appreciate the mad as a box of frogs effort that’s gone into this and I know some will love you for it.

-Mark


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SAC
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Writer,

I try not to bail on scripts but I can't help it here. Out by page 4 and there's no let up to what I'm reading. Agree with Jeff -- senseless. WTF were you on when you wrote this!

Steve


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Not for me.


Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
Available Short screenplays - http://www.anthonycawood.co.uk/short-scripts
Available Feature screenplays - http://www.anthonycawood.co.uk/feature-film-scripts/
Screenwriting articles - http://www.anthonycawood.co.uk/articles
IMDB Link - http://www.imdb.com/name/nm6495672/?ref_=fn_al_nm_1
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