The Final Cut by Dominik - Short, Drama - Steven has the ability to cut his next day with a program, but what happens when he accidentally cuts his death scene?  14 pages - pdf, format

That was a bit different. Some interstellar stuff there. Dialogue was on the nose. I got the feeling the writer is young? Interesting concept.

Dominik,

Some notes.

This one needs a lot of work.  The story is disjointed and far too coincidental.  The writing needs improvement.  The dialogue is obvious and insipid.  I suggest you read a lot of good screenplays and study how good writers create characters, dialogue, and action.  The story concept works just fine--a dad sends visions of the future so the son can determine what's best.  What is missing is the irony of choosing what seems best only to discover it's a sour bite.  

Best
Richard

When I try to read it, it says printed with an unregistered version of fade in, and all of the letters are just blocks.