Karen: many grammatical and format errors need attention,
Quoted Text INT.MARRON FARM-MORNING |
Spacing is wrong. Should be: INT. MARRON FARM - MORNING
Quoted Text A GOLD CROSS lays against a white dress worn by a plump,white, southern belle VIRGINIA(17) sh she runs out of the house.The CONGREGATION of white southerners SING along
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space needed between plump, and white. sh - she = typo. Space needed between house. and The
Quoted Text EXT.MARRON FARM-CONTINUOUS |
Should be: EXT. MARRON FARM - CONTINUOUS
Quoted Text The songs continues as Virginia runs into the family car.We
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Space needed between car. and We You have these errors throughout the script - a good scrubbing is in order. |