In this one, I can't find a character that interests me. The stoner shows little aptitude for anything, and the art student doesn't seem very arty at all. He's a user, and she's a cheat. How have they stayed together all this time? And the story goes nowhere. Kim is no nearer a decision at the end, and the stoner is still a lay-about. Even the argument lacks real zing. Where are the recriminations? Those things that every person keeps close to the vest just in case they're needed as a come back. How about that time...
So, bottom line, I think this one needs bigger things, more tense moments.