Nice little revenge tale, could see where it was headed but that didnít dampen the payoff. Grandpaís mean, but the kid turns out to be far worse.
An idea as to Michaelís age would help - unless I missed it? Could potentially lose the Mother character to keep it even simpler. Some random double spacing is probably making this appear longer than it is - not sure if anyone else is getting that when they open it?
Best of luck,