First slug doesn't have "day" or "night" in it.
Straight into sniffing used tampons..
On page two, and I'm not digging the bloody tampon humour.
Quite a few spelling mistakes and typos too.
By page 6, Jesus, Ghandi, Mother Teresa and Hitler were having a game of baseball.
Sorry, just not my thing at all. The humour didn't connect at all. Maybe others will like it.
Best of luck