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Posted: August 31st, 2018, 3:47pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Revolutionary by Lee Field - Drama, Historical, War - In an untold story from the Revolutionary War, an unlikely woman turned spy is the key to securing the victory of General Washington and the American war for independence. 100 pages - pdf format

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Action speaks louder than dialogue.

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Was she French by any chance?

Read the first couple of pages and the dialogue is too OTN and expository. You need to learn the art of subtext.
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