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Posted: January 11th, 2019, 1:29pm Report to Moderator
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Genesis by Nate Zegue  - Drama - After a young man creates an artificial intelligence program, his life spirals out of control and the program he designs helps him regain control. 37 pages - pdf format

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INT. Ukraine - Hospital Room – Day

should be

INT. HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY

You could indicate it is in Ukraine through a subtitle, like

SUPER: UKRAINE.


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Nate: Yes - all scene heading should be CAPPED.

Here;s a link for you:

https://www.storysense.com/format/slugs.htm


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A young girl is sitting next to the bed of her father who is
suffering from cancer.


Characters need to be CAPPED when first intro'd. In this case YOUNG GIRL and FATHER.

So - in just your first 1/5th of your opening page you have some very basic mistakes. Do a little research on script format - read some scripts, etc. and you will pick it up.


My Scripts can all be seen here:

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