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Don
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 1:43pm Report to Moderator
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Spent the weekend at "Too Many Games" in PA helping the heir to the Boose fortune hype his game - Miracle Mia (Please wish list it on Steam and help get him out of my basement,) which launches in a couple of months.

I left without my computer, hence the lack up updates.

I will make it up to you.*

Don

*Let's be honest, we all know I won't...  I never learn.


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Zack
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 2:09pm Report to Moderator
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Don't get it right. Get it written.

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No apology is needed, Don. You're the man.


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AnthonyCawood
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No apology necessary.

Hope the game is a hit!


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Dustin
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 2:54pm Report to Moderator
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Action speaks louder...

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A couple of my kids are into this now. I wish him (and you) luck.


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pale yellow
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No apology needed silly!!! You work too hard already!!


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jayrex
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 4:45pm Report to Moderator
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Cut to three weeks earlier

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I've added it to my wishlist.


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Dustin
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 4:55pm Report to Moderator
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"Miracle Mia is a cute action-adventure platformer where the main heroine must fend off against an invading horde of dark beings. Mia, with the aid of her tennis racket, defend and reflect the enemy's attacks right back at them. Using the skills of tennis, will Mia be able to overcome the trials ahead?"

The first and second word in bold and underlined are unnecessary. Both sentences underlined are also quite poor. Consider this brief rewrite for now:

Miracle Mia is a cute action-adventure platformer where the heroine must fend off an invading horde of dark beings. With the aid of her tennis racket, she can deflect an enemy's attacks right back at them. Using her tennis skills, will Mia be able to overcome the trials ahead?

It still needs quite a bit of work. I'd rewrite entirely, but the above at least makes things a little cleaner.


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No apology needed, Don.

Best of luck with the game!


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Hope the game kicks ass Don!  


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Good luck with this, Don


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Good luck to all involved.


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Wow! That's great news about the game. No apologise necessarry and thanks for linking the Surrender comic!


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Don
Posted: June 25th, 2019, 1:02pm Report to Moderator
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Thanks everyone for their support and words of encouragement.  Thank you, Dustin, for the editing work on the games description.  I've passed that along to my son.

- Don


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leitskev
Posted: June 25th, 2019, 1:18pm Report to Moderator
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Who is this Don character? Is he new around here?
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ChrisBodily
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I've been largely absent, too. You don't need to apologize for anything. Life gets busy for everybody.


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