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Apology for skipping out (currently 1513 views) |
Don |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 1:43pm |
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AdministratorAdministrator So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts16417 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
Spent the weekend at "Too Many Games" in PA helping the heir to the Boose fortune hype his game - Miracle Mia (Please wish list it on Steam and help get him out of my basement,) which launches in a couple of months. I left without my computer, hence the lack up updates. I will make it up to you.* Don *Let's be honest, we all know I won't... I never learn. |
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Zack |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 2:09pm |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4497 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
No apology is needed, Don. You're the man. |
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AnthonyCawood |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 2:36pm |
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LocationUK Posts4321 Posts Per Day 1.13 |
No apology necessary.
Hope the game is a hit! |
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DustinBowcot |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 2:54pm |
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A couple of my kids are into this now. I wish him (and you) luck. |
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Pale Yellow |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 4:34pm |
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No apology needed silly!!! You work too hard already!! |
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jayrex |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 4:45pm |
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Old Timer Cut to three weeks earlier
LocationLondon, UK Posts1420 Posts Per Day 0.22 |
I've added it to my wishlist. |
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DustinBowcot |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 4:55pm |
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"Miracle Mia is a cute action-adventure platformer where the main heroine must fend off against an invading horde of dark beings. Mia, with the aid of her tennis racket, defend and reflect the enemy's attacks right back at them. Using the skills of tennis, will Mia be able to overcome the trials ahead?"
The first and second word in bold and underlined are unnecessary. Both sentences underlined are also quite poor. Consider this brief rewrite for now:
Miracle Mia is a cute action-adventure platformer where the heroine must fend off an invading horde of dark beings. With the aid of her tennis racket, she can deflect an enemy's attacks right back at them. Using her tennis skills, will Mia be able to overcome the trials ahead?
It still needs quite a bit of work. I'd rewrite entirely, but the above at least makes things a little cleaner.
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Philostrate |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 5:49pm |
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No apology needed, Don.
Best of luck with the game! |
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 6:31pm |
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LocationTexas Posts1306 Posts Per Day 0.32 |
Hope the game kicks ass Don! |
| Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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stevie |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 6:57pm |
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LocationDown Under Posts3441 Posts Per Day 0.61 |
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Warren |
Posted: June 24th, 2019, 7:25pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Good luck to all involved. |
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MarkRenshaw |
Posted: June 25th, 2019, 2:50am |
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LocationUK Posts2335 Posts Per Day 0.58 |
Wow! That's great news about the game. No apologise necessarry and thanks for linking the Surrender comic! |
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Don |
Posted: June 25th, 2019, 1:02pm |
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AdministratorAdministrator So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts16417 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
Thanks everyone for their support and words of encouragement. Thank you, Dustin, for the editing work on the games description. I've passed that along to my son.
- Don |
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leitskev |
Posted: June 25th, 2019, 1:18pm |
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Who is this Don character? Is he new around here? |
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ChrisBodily |
Posted: June 25th, 2019, 10:06pm |
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I've been largely absent, too. You don't need to apologize for anything. Life gets busy for everybody. |
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