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Posted: July 7th, 2019, 7:24am Report to Moderator
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Cetaceans by Paul S. Nurkowski - Sci Fi, Fantasy - As advances in bio.robotics enable inter species communication between dolphins(Cetaceans) and human scientists, who reveal that dolphins are descended from a race of aliens and smarter than people, a powerful army of men plot to destroy the scientists' work and pirate the dolphins' ancient alien technologies to rule the world. 99 pages

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Not much to say about this. Professional writing, formatting looks flawless, pacing looks good besides the slow start.
If I were you I would ditch the capitals regarding the names after the first time characters introduced and bring the action a little bit faster.
Fascinating job nevertheless.


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