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Don
Posted: August 12th, 2019, 6:07pm Report to Moderator
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The Hiber Nation by Jorge Alves - Sci Fi, Fantasy, Post-Apocalyptic - In a post-apocalyptic world, a scout hot air balloon spots an isolated mountain agricultural community and a young survivor, Kevin, decides to follow it to try to save his family and friends from likely enslavement or death. 141 pages - pdf format

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Because it says, Post Apocalyptic in the genre, this grabbed my attention. But 141 pages !! seriously? Nobody will read this just because of the page count. Try to bring it down somewhere near 110 pages.
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Yes.

Really you need to get it under 120 pages.

better yet 100, that will force you to cut out uneccesary info.


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