Hi William
I'll keep this short.
I really enjoyed it, especially liked the action cutting between the teachings, training in the woods, and the final showdown - The non-linear kept the story moving and interesting, so good style choice there.
My only criticism is that it feels rushed - especially the action. You obviously don't want fully choreographed fight scenes but I wanted more than "they fight" - the key moments in the fight, the feeling/emotion/turning points... a little more evocative.
Good work |