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Don
Posted: April 3rd, 2020, 4:24pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Actor by Mpumelelo - Short, Drama - An audition becomes reality.  12 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice


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Don  -  July 11th, 2021, 9:18am
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Is this unproduced?
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Grandma Bear
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Quoted from oteb72
Is this unproduced?


Since there is no contact info on the cover page, if you are interested in the script, you can always contact Don, the webmaster, and ask him for a contact email.  


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Hi there.

Great story bro. It didn't even matter about formatting or grammatical issues. I really enjoyed the narrative, language and interactions between your characters throughout. the nuances were spot on. Good luck with filming this one.

John Stone.


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Funny stuff, indeed!

Terrific characters and situation.
Formatting does need a thorough cleanup but I agree with John that the story carries this.

GIRL
(to Luke)
What do you need?

Luke, has no fuckin idea, whatsoever, as to what he needs.

ECU: ON LUKE
he's aware of the fact that he'll be in deep shit, should he
mention that he lied to Mazeven about being a nurse.

He thinks about what he needs,then.

LUKE
(mumbling)
Google.



I hope the writer makes an appearance.


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