Hi
A well written story, very easy to read. Nice work.
It's a sad truth with how discriminate everybody was towards the homeless guy. Homelessness is something that I'm quite compassionate about and its good to a see short based on that.
It was just the ending that left a bit of a sour-taste in my mouth. I know that life's unfair but poor old Doug still gets treated like crap even after he saves the day. Was just hoping that at least one person could acknowledge his sacrifice.
Anyway, good work!
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