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Posted: August 14th, 2022, 6:26pm Report to Moderator
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Capturing Annabelle by Brandi Self  - Comedy, Dark - An artist obsessed with his psychotic ex-girlfriend rallies a group of women to portray her so he won’t lose his creative edge but grows concerned when one of her replacements begins an entanglement with her.  104 pages - pdf format[b]

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Are you on the boards, Brandi?

I read the opening ten - funny. Some of the character descriptions are odd. In the sense that they use a lot of words, but actually have little substance - "fashionably casual and famously polished" " artistically awkward" etc etc. Small stuff.

Happy to post a full critique if you're here to see it.


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