Flavor of the Month by Jose L. Villanueva - Drama, Mystery - A young hot writer pitches his next story to a studio head. The writer's pitch becomes the film-within-the-film as we see what he describes. The story leads to a twist ending that makes one wonder what is real and what is make believe. - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

First off, I'm new to the boards here.  Like you hadn't noticed.

Hello.

Second, I read this thing in one sitting.  I always love when films are interconnected and ideas overlap, so of course I ate this one up.  I think the dialogue has room to improve, but the story and characters kept me going right until the end.

Very, very, very nice.