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Posted by: Don, January 22nd, 2005, 3:10pm
Killer Worms by Dominador Tomate - Horror - After spending several years in prison for fraud, Sam Mendoza returns home to his roots to start over and rekindle a high school romance.  On his first day back, he saves the life of a high school buddy, who in return, offers him a job working for his irrigation company.  His neighbor and another high school friend who is a deputy sheriff, investigates a homicide where the victim’s flesh is completely eaten off through the bone.  It doesn’t create attention until mutilated animals and another victim pop up at nearby farms, one of which raises earthworms. - rtf, format 8)
Posted by: ghostwriter433, January 25th, 2005, 3:36pm; Reply: 1
The feel of the screenplay is good.  But I got bored reading some of it.  For an example, the beginning of the script, you ramble on about farmlands.  Who cares, I just want to be entertained.  

But, I like the concept.  At least you used your noodle.  But I would give this a rewite and it might turn up great.  And here's some advice, start you scene's later.  Page one would be great if you opened with, Fade in:  "A man finds bones inside a gutter."  Or what ever.  Good luck.
Posted by: Austin, October 5th, 2005, 12:26pm; Reply: 2
There is a movie with the exact concept titled "SQUIRM". In case you didn't know that
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