Journey - Chapter One by R.E. Freak - Horror - The world as we know it has ended. A massive outbreak has spread across the Earth, killing millions in the first hours. With each passing day less and less survivors remain, fighting against a new threat: the reanimated bodies of the dead. In a small town, hours away from civilization, a small group of survivors assemble in an abandoned school. Jack: A loner hiding in the general store. Kevin, Jessie, and Fenton: Traveling cross country with no goal in mind. Filla and West: Hikers, trying to fight their way to an isolated cabin deep in the mountains. They barricade themselves in, fighting off the seemingly endless hordes of undead at their door. Soon they begin to find their resources dwindling. With time running out they attempt an escape, but face a new threat: the undead are watching them, and they are learning.  - html, format 8)

I read this version of "Journey" last night and I thought it was great. I didn't even notice very many of the changes, so I don't know if that's good or bad but I still loved this script.

The only thing is that I think the opening titles would be a lot more effective if they placed over silence instead of a Chilli Pepper's song, but seeming how its in script form I dont suppose it matters.

Quoted from chism I didn't even notice very many of the changes, so I don't know if that's good or bad but I still loved this script.

There weren't that many changes. I just added some stuff to fill on a couple of minor plot holes I noticed, having gone back to read it after almost a year, and changed a couple of scenes to something I liked better.

Quoted Text The only thing is that I think the opening titles would be a lot more effective if they placed over silence instead of a Chilli Pepper's song, but seeming how its in script form I dont suppose it matters.

Generally I always pick a song that has a good tone that I feel suites the script, then I use it to keep me in the mindset while writing so it maintains the same feel throughout. It's more of a note really, a habit I've gotten into. Probably not a good one.

Well I've never actually heard that song so I don't know if it suits the tone of the opening or watever.

But still a great script. Why did you change the title to just "Journey" instead of "Journey To Death"?

I really liked this script.  Any word on when Chapter Two is gonna be released?

It's actually finished, I'm just finishing some tweaks so they're all ready for when I release the final third chapter some time in the next... while...