Roanoke by Vito Souza & Tyrone Banks - Horror - A strange series of events start to happen as a professor digs deeply into the mystery of the Lost village of “Roanoke.” After the sudden disappearance of two campers and a dare from a group of college kids go wrong. The town finds out the true force of the Evil, which comes upon them from all directions revealing more than they wish for. - rtf, format 8)

You have a very interesting monster. Something that will not be hunkered down by the CGI makeup. That's very hard to do nowadays.

The script gets a little corny in the last ten minutes. Try to stay away from the massive-exposition-in-just-one-scene.

Bryy, thank you for taking the time to read "Roanoke"
Your honest comments and opinion are valuable to Vito and myself as we continue to learn!

Thanks!

is this script based on roanoke va????

It's loosely based on the Roanoke Colonists (100 plus people vanished) who vanished off the coast of North Carolina  in 1591.

cant wait to read this script, ive always been interested in that legend, and loved how stephen king used it in "storm of the century"...hopefully, ur script is good... 8)