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Posted by: Don, February 19th, 2005, 5:51pm
The Apartment by Jay Lovito (cinema114) - Short, Horror - Strange things happen to a young building superintendent on a lonely night. - rtf format.
Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), February 19th, 2005, 8:25pm; Reply: 1
This story doesn't make any sense to me.  What are you trying to do here?


Phil
Posted by: guust, February 26th, 2005, 4:24pm; Reply: 2
Hoi,
I like your story, but i feels uncompleted in the last part. I dont know what, but the end leave to much gues. It's more like the end of an episode.
otherwise if it is good workt out and modifight i can become a good horror.
Posted by: Michael Myers, June 21st, 2005, 8:37pm; Reply: 3
I don't think he needs to threaten to shoot himself to get a room. I liked the story though
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