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Posted by: Don, April 25th, 2005, 9:53am

Mark Of The Loser by Brett S. Harrison - Comedy - When an Arrogant CEO is suddenly branded as a Loser, he must follow the advice of a sassy Fortune Teller to regain his status, woo a Beautiful Med Student, and overcome his fears -- before he loses everything forever. - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: kev, June 4th, 2005, 8:26pm; Reply: 1

This was okay nothing too great but was funny at times sometimes a little slow but it made me laugh! keep it up it was FUNNY! but the wooing the beautiful med student is a little lame its been done alot!! but it was funny so KEEP IT UP!

Posted by: eljefedetonto, June 5th, 2005, 8:36am; Reply: 2

Good story, nothing over the top but defintely something different. You might want to drop "woo a beautiful med student" from your log line; it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of it. Obviously it works well in the story, though.

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