The Tunnels by James Napier - Horror - Originally written as a 90-minute BBC drama. - pdf, format 8)

This log-line is not very telling at all.  There's a ton of stuff around here, and these descriptions need to peak the interest of a potential reader.

Could we please have a little more information on the story we might expect?

Bert,

The logline was deliberately 'cut to size' simply because of all my time coming on here, very few people have helped their cause with loglines. Most are overwritten, rambling and quite often contain spelling mistakes. And, considering this is horror/thriller, the title gives you a fair bit of information from the outset.

That said, I take your point and it's a fair one, but for me criteria such as genre & formatting is more pertinent to finding the more serious writers.

Best,

James